AGENT X
Natasha
I love the story and the interpretation of this challenge. Well, it is very awesome. I’d rather called it a nicely and well-planned murder because if someone just really did it in the real world, it wouldn't be too obvious or suspicious. Speaking of the attire and the hair stuff, you just dida great job, but look at the tip of that hair, it looks so flat and kind of non-dimensional. And personally, I believe you’ve done better. In term of PHOTOSHOP stuff, I think people standing so close to that stage should not be that blurred so it looks sort of not pleasing. But it’s very ok. Oh well, I wanna add some comment about that color tone. I think in that situation, you could’ve played more with the lights or filters to make the picture become more outstanding and flashy. But overall, you did a very very good job.
Anna
Speaking of the story, it might be too fantasy. Imagine you’re walking into a shop, I don’t think if in a normal standard store would have a naked unpacked knife with a barcode on it being sold. That would be very dangerous. What if kids were playing it and accidentally stabbed onto each other? Oh god… police’s coming! So when you go to the cashier, that will be weird especially you have drops of red stained water on it. I don’t think others would believe though. I think it’s quite too lame. Plus, the sims is too big and the tone is not really good. Because the shopping mall should have white or brighter lights. But overall, you did well.
Mitchel
Bravo! I think this picture really tells everything. I love the weapon you used. That’s kind of new and interesting (???). It feels like I’m watching a mystery film or something. Your outfits looks great except that headphones because they make your wire necklace become less outstanding. When I look into your eyes, they are so sad and dramatic but the face is so… empty and unemotional. I couldn’t tell whether it’s good or bad. But overall , it’s just great. The color tone is so nice.
Samantha
I don’t know if that tiny gun exists in the real world but it is lethal and be able to kill, so no problem. And really, that gun as an accessory doesn’t go along with you at all, especially when I see you as a sweet and naïve girl. Here comes the photoshop stuff, that gun is so unreal and obviously seen as being photoshopped. Maybe you should add some shading on both ofyour weapon and the skin.
Aspyn
Actually, you have a very good storyline that gives me some idea of the cause of the murder, but it is not strong enough. It doesn’t make sense if you kill a friend because you just had a problem of him/her and how can you be so numb after all? I love that shopping basket but the background is not what it is meant to be. Maybe, it’s the picture quality because I need more details. The color tone is too soft and way too ordinary. But you did a great job.
มีมี่
This is one of my favorite work. Almost everything is perfect, which I love. Let’s talk about the cons of this work. First, I don’t go with that flower on your hair because it’s way too flat. You could add more shading or shadow to make perfect. Second, the light comes from the top, so your sims' shadow should go down. That’s all I want to say ‘cause everything is just perfect! I love the color tone!
Katheryn
OMG! That cutter is extremely obvious. If I were you, I could find another place to hide it. So you just put that cutter over your boobs ? That is very suspicious. And you just can't touch that bloody hand on your bf’s back. Why? Because it’s not just the blood that stained on your bf’s jacket, but including your fingerprints! OH.. But speaking of the other elements, esp. the lights, composition, and color tone, you did well.
Adrian
Well… you said you just killed your friend by a wig? So, the police would have investigated that the weapon was the wig. Then… it leads to you. If you wore the wig that night, you would be the no.1 suspect. And you’re a movie star? So the paparazzi would have their eyes on you. In other words, everyone keeps the eyes on you including you friends. Wouldn’t they feel suspicious about you? So your storyline basically kills you because it makes the whole thing doesn’t make sense. And speaking of you as a movie star… you wouldn’t want to let others have you photographed with that red sauce.
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